Thursday, May 29, 2008

Freckles

They're in an army,fighting,but not very hard,yet winning. They're like a virus,spreading. Waiting to appear and spread. Deadly. Killing thousands. Ready to come out of nowhere and attack at the most unexpected moment. Waiting. Waiting to appear and spread on your face. They come in packs. Sometimes even in hundreds. The smallest one can be deadly,so watch out. You may be NEXT.

9 comments:

hillsoz said...

wow that is so true good job on writing it though

Kat said...

Yeah. I was inspired by how many freckles I got on Tuesday when I went to the pool. And at night I thought of it so I wrote it down to post when I got home from school.

Eunice said...

I know that freckles are a big issue with you; however, I couldn't help but smile as I read your account. What a creative way of expressing your feelings!!!

David said...

I'm not especially worried... I don't freckle :P

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Anonymous said...

oh,that's nice. You must have gotten that from Dad... :(

Anonymous said...

a bit dramatic but i liked it! Freckles bug me too.

Kat said...

It's not dramatic! :)

Annalyn said...

I like freckles. I only get a few in the summer, though.